The plot is also extremely obvious, as soon as I reached the part where Ellie, who hates the MC, meets the very good looking Chief of police, I guessed that Mr clean Chief of police would probably be the bad guy and an MC member would have to save Ellie and that will change her mind about the MC guys. If I had to read Cage thinking about Tegan at eight, Tegan at twelve with braces and glasses, Tegan at sixteen looking at him like he was her world, Tegan at seventeen ignoring him not looking at him, then older sexy new look Tegan hating on him, all in the one monologue over and over, honestly I was going to scream. So I definitely felt cheated out of their story. They needed many more scenes together, and even when they finally have a heated scene, there's nothing to it, it doesn't even say if Ellie enjoys it or if he makes her climax, and that's the one and only bedroom scene for them.
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It actually annoyed me that it cut a full year out of their story. The first time it jumps ahead a year and while it works alright for Tegan and Cage's part of the story, personally I felt it didn't work for Ellie and Dirty. Ellie and Dirty's story-line is better but again this author just doesn't really write it in enough detail so it doesn't achieve it's potential, it also feels choppy with all the jumps ahead in time it does. It's like the author couldn't come up with much of a story for Cage and Tegan and had to fill the pages with another couple's story instead and Cage and Tegan's story really does feel very empty. So actually a good half or more of this book is Dirty and Ellie's story. Then switches to Cage and Tegan then back to Ellie and Dirty. This is supposed to be Tegan and Cage's story but for a full 20 pages, the whole of chapter 2, it's actually an introduction to two other characters, Dirty and Ellie. I felt very cheated out of Dirty and Ellie's story. Instead I disliked the character's and what interesting points there were, there weren't enough details or depth given to enjoy them. Like in book 1, the writing did not deliver on the tortured-ness of the male character's including Deuce. Instead most of the stories are repetitive, tiresome and aggravating.
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the books in this series have a good premise but the writing doesn't deliver a good story. To learn more about how and for what purposes Amazon uses personal information (such as Amazon Store order history), please visit our Privacy Notice.
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